These words all fit a cheating spouse, significant other, lover, boyfriend/girlfriend etc.

Trashed

Slashed

Cheat

Meet                                                                                                                                                                                                

                                        InterruptionsDestruction

Deceit

Incomplete

Wrong

Strong

Can’t go on……

Why did you do this to me?

I thought what we had meant something.

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Comments (18)
  • Hansika on Nov 18, 2009

    nice piece…

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 18, 2009

    Well put together.

  • ceegirl on Nov 18, 2009

    excellent

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009

    it is nice…..

  • drelayaraja on Nov 18, 2009

    Very good poem

  • ashan1614 on Nov 18, 2009

    Blunt and to the point. I like it!

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009

    A great and nice piece of work..

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 18, 2009

    Great one and very creative idea.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 18, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Themax on Nov 18, 2009

    very nice ,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Aiyanna on Nov 18, 2009

    Very true!!! :)

  • A. Fool on Nov 18, 2009

    Very good use of images

  • infonaturale on Nov 18, 2009

    Well arranged

  • jhenz on Nov 18, 2009

    wow. very well presented. as I was reading one word/description at a time, it’s as if there’s also a knife stabbing. nice one!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    Thank everyone for your comments.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 21, 2009

    Very apt and precise.Great job.

  • Richard O Harris on Nov 21, 2009

    You are definitely not alone, thanks. rickinjaxfl@yahoo.com

  • Dame Barbara on Nov 25, 2009

    Like most women, it sounds like you have experienced a little of this.

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