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Desire of Needed Kisses (Poetry Challenge: Reflections in The Mirror)

Kristie Claar on Jan 28, 2012
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Philly Dreamer is challenging the poets of Triond yet again. I only hope I can compete with all the great talent out there.

Desire

Of needed

Kisses

Are

Kisses

Needed of

Desire

Check out Philly Dreamer’s new poetry challenge at:  Poetry Challenge: Reflections in The Mirror

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  • BANASCO on Jan 28, 2012

    Good work done you’ve make me feel the desire to be kissed tonight.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 28, 2012

    Thank you BANASCO. God Bless!

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 29, 2012

    This style of poetry seems to give double meaning frequently. What was your interpretation of what you wrote here?

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 29, 2012

    Nice.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 29, 2012

    @Philly – The lonely desire kisses, even those in a marriage and when kisses are received, they desire more.

    Thank you for reading and commenting Philly and Nidhi, God Bless!

  • ImKarn23 on Jan 29, 2012

    sexy!

  • HannanRKhan on Jan 29, 2012

    Superb

  • FX777222999 on Jan 29, 2012

    Seems wonderful indeed.

  • xphantoms on Jan 29, 2012

    beautiful

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 29, 2012

    very good

  • sheilanewton on Jan 29, 2012

    Superb. This poetry form is really exciting

  • V rank on Jan 29, 2012

    You really never get tired of making poems Kristen… Continue doing what you love doing…

  • dwisuka on Jan 29, 2012

    great one

  • tr10nd3rs on Jan 29, 2012

    nice share

  • girishpuri on Jan 29, 2012

    interesting

  • bryan21764 on Jan 30, 2012

    I liked it. Make you think,

    Bryan

  • lucia anna on Jan 30, 2012

    Very interesting share

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 30, 2012

    Thanks all! I do love poetry and at one time, I did not think I was good enough. However you all give me the confidence that I need to continue! God Bless!

  • sheilanewton on Jan 30, 2012

    Oh, yes – a littl piece of magic, Kristie.

  • iTrMandar on Jan 31, 2012

    I liked it!

  • Margaret Boseroy on Jan 31, 2012

    You really have a knack for this.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 31, 2012

    Thank you sheilanewton, iTrMandar, and Margaret Boseroy for reading and commenting, God Bless!

  • lyan08 on Feb 1, 2012

    nice share..

  • marqjonz on Feb 1, 2012

    Good stuff.

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 1, 2012

    Thank you lyan08 and marqjonz. God Bless!

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