The way a born loser thinks! he is one of us but the secret why he loses everywhere is highlighted in this poem by me!

You wanna live but its pulling you back,
and you think what u lack!
you wanna find yourself,
and refire with your attack!

you wanna rest but its asking you to come closer,
and you think like a soldier!
you wanna end but it wont ever get over,
and you find that hidden power!

you wanna bleed n fall down to the seed,
but you pray to your soul to forgive this deed!
you wanna make it right but its all destructed!
and you think what was before said!

you wanna step right up but you are afraid
and you think was it worth for what your life had paid!
you neva wanted to see it,
and you think why the hell was this world ever made!

you wanna do it again
and you think what if i get the same pain
you want it all to feel
and you think what if it crushes me like a wheel

you wanna represent but u still fall,
and you think if it is all!
you wanna decline in the air
that’s why you lose everywhere!

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  • amandeep13 on Jan 19, 2010

    Informative piece

    Well Explained

  • Sushant94 on Jan 19, 2010

    thanks!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 20, 2010

    Hello Friend

    Future William Wordsworth

    worthy of being one

    good luck

  • Sushant94 on Jan 21, 2010

    lol! thanks!

  • Demon Alone on Jan 21, 2010

    Lol could make that into a rap.

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