Desiring

Judi Eddy on Dec 5, 2009

Tags: Desire, Dreams, love. passion, lust

I dream of making love to you.

Within my heart, burns a raging fire.
I always yearn for your love, my undying desire.
I long to feel the warmth of your embrace,
Come and lay me down on the bed of lace.

Our bodies entwine, we kiss, and make love,
Passionate, hot, the earth always moves.
Nothing else seems to matter, we are making our dream.
We slither into each other, I sigh, I scream.

Always give me your love and your tender touch,
I could never live without it, I need it so much.
Just stay a little longer, please don.t go,
Stroke my body one more time….My God..I love you so.

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ceegirl on Dec 5, 2009
Very good poet.
K.Reshma on Dec 5, 2009
Great poem
deep blue on Dec 5, 2009
Cheers for that burning spirit within. Nice lines.
TroostAvenue on Dec 5, 2009
Well, Judi, that is about as sensuous as it gets, within the bounds of good taste. Now I will always think of you as that slithering screamer. Damn, girl, that’s really hot.
TroostAvenue on Dec 5, 2009
Just wondered what your sons and daughters think of their mother now. Already know how your husband must feel.
LitWurst on Dec 5, 2009
I feel like love-making poems are the hardest ones to pace, and you’ve done a great job with that here. Well done.
Liz Sapphire on Dec 5, 2009
Nice rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing =)
Rinkal Desai on Dec 5, 2009
i like it ….
Darla Cooke on Dec 5, 2009
Very sensual and romantic!
sandie on Dec 5, 2009
another good poem from you my friend,sandie x.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 5, 2009
Wow! That is such a passionate and tantalizing piece.

Christine
Themax on Dec 5, 2009
very moving and well done friend,I love my god too
diamondpoet on Dec 5, 2009
Very passionate work, I liked it. thanks for sharing.
Petalm on Dec 5, 2009
Very erotic
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 5, 2009
Your desire burns my fire
I can feel your emotions entire
Whom you yearn for
I really can’t say
But when we meet
Notes we shall display.

The fire hopefully will
Consume me not
And my burning desire
Wouldn’t by then
Have become, nought
SlyTresmarie on Dec 5, 2009
passionate!
Snooky on Dec 6, 2009
Bed of lace mmm, whew!
johnnydod on Dec 6, 2009
phew wowweee nice poem
cutedrishti8 on Dec 9, 2009
Wonderful piece of write..
T. S. Lewis on Dec 9, 2009
The last line provided a nice cherry on top.
PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009
Very passionate. Great imagery.
Colleen Ranney on Dec 20, 2009
Hot Hot . Another great writing. I enjoy your poetry.
Stan Wilson on Dec 30, 2009
Love is a beautiful thing,
it breathes life,
more than a golden ring,
for an enduring wife…

you have written a very beautiful poem here….your a hard act to follow….

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