Captives because they are sinners, taken to pay their debts in life.

There it goes that train
Rushing down the track
Its got to travel on
Never coming back.
                    
Its destination the twilight zone
The land of the living dead
The passengers on board
Are captives so its said .
                            
Captives because they are sinners
Wrong doers of this earth
Taken to pay their debts in life
They are sinners of no worth
                              
The train as now vanished
Into the thick night fog
Destination twilight zone
Or is it planet zog
                        
The journey is of no return
It vanishes in the night
It never returns later
But its empty at day light
 Destination the twilight zone.

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  • J.K.R on Feb 28, 2009

    Now this is my kind of stuff, not only do you use your imagination you open up the inner mind of the reader. Well done let me see some more like this in the near future.

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