Devil Calling (Haiku)

Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011

Tags: devil, resist, sin, temptation

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Surely one can resist the temptation of the devil.

Feeling in my neck

The devil is sure to call

Minds are full of sin

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Comments (32)

megamatt09 on Nov 4, 2011
Good work.
Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011
Thank you megamatt09 for reading and commenting. Thank you also for helping me support the Klein family this month. God Bless!
Joe Ram on Nov 4, 2011
Great one.
girishpuri on Nov 5, 2011
good one
Kristie Claar on Nov 5, 2011
Thank you Joe and girishpuri for reading and commenting, God Bless. On behalf of the Klein family I thank you too.
beingwell on Nov 5, 2011
Interesting topic, friend.
sheilanewton on Nov 5, 2011
Ooh – I always enjoy spooky stuff.
KittyK on Nov 5, 2011
He is certainly not welcome in my life or household!!!
Melody SJAL on Nov 5, 2011
He should have no place in our lives. Great.
tenraj on Nov 6, 2011
interesting one.
freebird989 on Nov 6, 2011
interesting stuff!
FX777222999 on Nov 6, 2011
Good poem my friend.
ittech on Nov 6, 2011
thanks very nice
lxdollarsxl on Nov 6, 2011
Its the first time i have seen a Haiku from your pen, and it works
Kristie Claar on Nov 7, 2011
Thank you all for reading and leaving such wonderful comments, God Bless!
vijayanths on Nov 7, 2011
Short and good.
lxdollarsxl on Nov 7, 2011
back again
rgreenfield on Nov 7, 2011
good work.
ittech on Nov 8, 2011
neck pain ?
Rayann Borman on Nov 8, 2011
Love and Prayers to the Klein family.
Yamin2011 on Nov 8, 2011
for the Klein family!
Kristie Claar on Nov 8, 2011
Thank you all for reading and commenting and helping me support the Klein family this month. God Bless!
Marlyna Borman on Nov 10, 2011
My thoughts are with the Klein family.
realityspeaks on Nov 11, 2011
Nice share
neopisiva on Nov 11, 2011
Good work, I liked it!
For the Kleins!
Kristie Claar on Nov 11, 2011
Thank you Marlyna, realityspeaks, and neopisiva for reading and commenting, God Bless!
Sheldon Claar on Nov 14, 2011
For the Klein family.
Kristie Claar on Nov 15, 2011
Thank you all so very much, God Bless!
Bill Claar on Nov 17, 2011
God Bless the Klein family.
Kristie Claar on Nov 18, 2011
Thank you all for reading and commenting. Thank you all for helping me to help the Klein family. God Bless all of you.
sheilanewton on Nov 28, 2011
A very dark haiku. Horror and suspense are my favourite genres for haiku. This one has the ‘wow’ factor.
Kristie Claar on Dec 2, 2011
Thank you sheilanewton for reading and commenting. God Bless!

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