liked this nice to think there is a reson for being nasty.

very nice. alot of people today need to read this, because there is alot of devil dust out there.

Great Job Pablina,I wish there wasn’t as many devils out there,Bravo”

Nice work!!

let this serve as a warning, nice job..

sounds like a brew of witch dust.Since I like to plug my stories I bet your reading this one might give you renewed inspiration.
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1354190/at_a_crossroad_of_denied_realities.html?cat=2

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1354190/at_a_crossroad_of_denied_realities.html?cat=2

Pablina really writes from the heart.

note to self never mess with you! lol =) nice poem

I need some of that devil dust for some girl’s

Keep up with the good work.

really great work!

keep it up,

cheers,

denus

Congrats on another great write,

Hi, pablina, how are you?
This is an interesting and up-front form of ballad stanza: 3 strung together. I like the fact it deals with justice in an appropriate way.
I would almost call it a poem, except for the offset first and last line, and the odd rhyme scheme. That makes it more of a free form than a poem. Other than that, really good job. I like the idea of using traditional form in fresh ways. Thanks for sharing.
By the way,… ‘advise’ is the verb, ‘advice’ the noun. And, to bring the focus back in on the verb prepare, get rid of the Be and just use the verb prepare.

It’s good – has a kind of witchy feel.

Interesting.

impressed

Very passionate.

Punishment for the wicked eh? I wish we can see it happening a lot though. But they tend to be popular and rich nowadays!

The wicked must be dealt with accordingly.

Well this does address the evil people of the world. Nice one.

Amazing poem! Wow:)

A fantastic expresssion of what we would all like to do with the trolls out there. Great work!

Interesting poem!

Is that what it is, devil dust? Seems there’s too much of it going around at times. Nice subject to write about. Well done!

’bout time ‘big D’ had a taste of his own medicine…
Well done!

A little spitefulness is healthy now and again. Just do not let it eat your whole life. good poem and good riddance to the bugger I say!

comment attempts ********* come on Triond this is ridiculous!!

I am exactly at this place in my personal life, and pretty depressed about it! Thank you for writing this, and thank you to Mn for leading me to it. Read my poem, http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/The-Fate-of-the-Whippoorwill.875541 to see what I mean….

Short and to the point! Nicely written

Many thoughts came to me as I was reading you well penned poem.I have felt this in my life.

Very good, Pablina!

flows well and really makes the point – nice!!

Well spoken and with great force for such a short piece.

Thanks for all the comments so far.

Enjoyed reading this Muches!
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty