A poem dedicated to all of those truly in love.

Devoted to You

You are everything I imagine a husband to be

With undying loyalty

And compassion and love that radiates infinitely

Patience and open minded…must say I appreciate the fact that you love me effortlessly

Being close but still giving me room to breath

Interest peeked instantly

It’s like our souls have always connected

Though our minds rejected

Passing it off as another up surd notion

So chronologically we developed separately

Ripened now and at our peak

Challenged by relationship past

But like a boxer exhausted but aware a KO is near…we last

Determined to persevere

Time seems to past seamlessly when I’m with you

Who can deny you are destined for me

The missing link that makes my life complete

Willing to unite and create a never dying symbol of unity

Complete with a picket fence..completely whole

Forever to insatiable partake of one and another’s soul

So with this when asked if I would marry you

Instead of simply saying yes

I say

I do

Swearing to be forever & earnestly devoted to you

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  • i. roberts on Nov 6, 2009

    wow, this really hit the spot, thank you! ;)

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