If I could cry for the pain of the people of the world I would.

When I was young I walked through the forest to a clearing,
And when I got there I saw what no other had seen.
I saw birds, I saw bees, I saw ripe apple trees,
There was water reflecting the scene.

To this day I have never spoken of my secret,
Such things are best left unclear.
For if I had told, the whole world would know,
And that place would soon disappear.

The next time I go to my magical place in the forest,
I’ll be sure to have someone by my side.
But I must be sure, your mind is secure,
‘Cause this place just has to survive.

There must be somewhere, someone with a heart just as mine,
Someone who is willing to go as far as it takes.
So we can be, Everyone, Thee and Me,
And not have to bear so much at the stake.

The tears that I’ve cried for the pain of everyone in the world,
They’ll fall like diamonds, one by one into the sea.
The diamond they’ll heal, the pain we all feel,
See them as the gift to you, from me.

So who will be there for me to guide through the forest?
Who will it be to take over my work when I’m gone?
Remember you must, have a heart I can trust,
And I’ll give you a kiss, as the gift, to help you carry on.

© Marie Milton

 

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  • Darla Cooke on Sep 20, 2009

    A beautifully written poem.

  • Shamanz on Sep 20, 2009

    This is beautiful. I expecially liked the name of the title “Diamond Tears” and the picture that went along with it. Absolutely stunning, a great idea for a poem!

    Write on.

  • Katie Marie on Sep 20, 2009

    Wonderful my friend.

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 20, 2009

    Very interesting one with nice snap..

  • agriculi on Sep 20, 2009

    that was great.

  • giftarist on Sep 21, 2009

    Like the pic and a great piece!

  • KitKat93 on Sep 21, 2009

    what a beautiful poem i loved it

  • lillyrose on Sep 22, 2009

    WOW…I still have goose bumps! thats was so beautifully written, you should send that one away for a competition. New fiction are always running poetry competitions.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 22, 2009

    interesting piece and well written. I liked it a lot.

  • Jacques Berkeley on Sep 29, 2009

    Excellent! Wow! What an artist!

  • larry84 on Oct 20, 2009

    A wonderful write! Sexy pic!

  • lillyrose on Jan 16, 2010

    Still sends shivers down my spine!

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