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Dichotomy (A Haiku)

Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 30, 2011
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Love is made complete through selflessness.

There’s no I in we
There is a dichotomy
To love’s to lose self

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  • Martin Kloess on Jul 30, 2011

    Good haiku but not always true

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 30, 2011

    Nice one.

  • MINISTER MARLENE SISTA REAL on Jul 30, 2011

    I think it is true! Like when we lose ourselves to the Lord,he can use us to express HIS love. When we decrease, he increases. Your right! Look at Jesus, he gave up his very life for the WE.

  • Xandine on Jul 30, 2011

    Nice imagery. Keep them coming. :-)

  • Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 30, 2011

    Absolutely Marlene. In so doing we have an opportunity to truly find ourselves. Sometimes we must lose our self to find out who or what we are really are.

  • Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 30, 2011

    Thanks :

    @Martin!

    @Xandine!

    @Rosetta

    for reading and commenting.

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 31, 2011

    I see a lot of talent here. keep up the good work:)

  • Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 31, 2011

    Thank you LD. Kind f you to say.

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