Limerick.

The husband would never win fight
Each response to wife was you’re right
A man so beguiled
Oft drove others wild
But oh how he smiled every night

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  • Kai Vicky on Sep 6, 2012

    Nice and funny. Good limerick.

  • avissado on Sep 6, 2012

    :) he got the rules right

  • ladym33 on Sep 6, 2012

    Well I guess as long as he was happy that is the important thing.

  • smokychristine on Sep 6, 2012

    Here’s to a happy man!

  • streakanime on Sep 6, 2012

    Love it. :3

  • Jswana on Sep 6, 2012

    Here’s to all of the above comments, thumbs up. So clever, witted and funny. :)

  • stevetheblogger on Sep 6, 2012

    Martin I do not know where these flashes of genius comes from you will have to let us all know. Wonderful piece
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Sep 6, 2012

    Why would he smile everynight, it does not sound like that great of a relationship having to concede?

  • LCM Linda on Sep 6, 2012

    Very witty. An enjoyable read.

  • Eunike on Sep 6, 2012

    Ha… ha… :)

  • Tiki33 on Sep 6, 2012

    This is quite unique. You always bring the best poetry.

  • Kharla Jolly on Sep 6, 2012

    LOL They were in total agreement, even when they saw things completely opposite! I love it, thanks for sharing another good limerick

  • Steven West on Sep 6, 2012

    That limerick was such a delight.

  • Aileen Tecson on Sep 7, 2012

    nice! Keep it up!

  • lapasan on Sep 7, 2012

    The husband should always say to his wife “You’re right” otherwise she might say “No” tonight.

  • waflay on Sep 7, 2012

    A loser he may be, but his love for her may be the cause. He is crazy for love!

  • Robin L on Sep 7, 2012

    Love it:)

  • Donnah Clark on Sep 7, 2012

    Sounds like they are well matched! Great share.

  • indianwriting on Sep 7, 2012

    it pays….keeping ur wife happy…
    ;-)

  • girishpuri on Sep 7, 2012

    delightful

  • elee on Sep 8, 2012

    beautiful description simple but with so many words inside these four lines

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