This one is sneaky.

                      flow with me

               into the heart

       of a man more sinister than i

there is blackness here

a fluid shadow

that beats with the moan

of a clock ticking

in a junkyard

wailing with exposure

at the light of our eyes

                                     quickly

                             we are expelled

                     but the black beat

              still exists

       within us

its heavy sound returns

on nights of silence

in every tick

of our digital clocks

on nights of passion

in every thump

of our digital hearts

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  • Aiyanna on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice one!!! Very creative:)

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 14, 2009

    digital hearts.. liked the idea…

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 14, 2009

    Very nicely presented………

  • K.Reshma on Nov 14, 2009

    Very well written

  • wonder on Nov 14, 2009

    A unique one.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009

    Extrodinary work.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009

    This is extrodinary work.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009

    This is extrodinary work thanks for sharing.

  • sandie on Nov 14, 2009

    good little poem

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice idea, very original

  • Chris Stonecipher on Nov 14, 2009

    Kris,
    Your poem is well written and creative. Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings,
    Chris

  • drelayaraja on Nov 17, 2009

    very good poem.

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