Just some mind bending thoughts.

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Arrow flies and strikes its target

          Self same arrow leaves not the bow

Closest friends stand face to face

          Yet half the pair is seen alone

Bright light shines upon the two

          But blackest darkness surrounds the one

Duet is sung in harmonious tune

          Yet I only hear a solo tongue

You lead me in the steps of dance

          How can that be, when I’m not there?

You see me present in your world

          But in my world you do not share

If life is lived in two dimensions

          Are those barriers safely crossed?

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  • Liane Schmidt on Nov 15, 2009

    Strong work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Darla Smith on Nov 15, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • ken bultman on Nov 15, 2009

    Interesting observations…barriers cannot be crossed; they must be removed.

  • Cebah on Nov 15, 2009

    Interesting perspective, Liked!

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Nov 15, 2009

    Interesting thoughts.

  • petercurtis97 on Nov 15, 2009

    I like your work. Your mind is out there, well done.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 15, 2009

    This gave me the chills, reading it, Katie. Really enjoyable read. I will be reading this one, over and over. Very unique!

  • STEVE666 on Nov 16, 2009

    Food for thought! Good write.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 16, 2009

    great write!

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