Dip Me Under the Moon

Liane Schmidt on Jan 6, 2008

Tags: beautiful, Beauty, dance, dip, divine, evening, float, forest, love, mind, Moon, ocean, poem, Poetry, River, romance, sea, share, sky, steady

Oh! divine is the night.

Dance with me through the forest in your mind
Dip me under the moon
Dip me now, dip me soon
Oh! Divine is the night that you and I share
The evening sky illuminates
With the magic of your beauty so fair
I’m here, right now
At your side, by your side, it’s true
If you could but read the verses in my heart
If you only knew
Your beauty moves me
Like the rivers and the steady seas
I float, sway and dance upon your waves
Close my eyes and feel the changing motion
It carries me further, deeper, closer
Combining as one, far into your unending oceans

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ranfuchs on Jan 6, 2008
I loved the flow, and the imagery. It did move me. Thank you
Pride Fishman on Jan 6, 2008
Beautifully written and has depth.

Please read my poems ‘long ago’ and ‘dearest mum’ and let me know what you think.
IcyCucky on Jan 6, 2008
Oh, just beautiful. It gives me lovely images.
Judy Sheldon-Walker on Jan 6, 2008
You write such pretty poetry full of wonderful images
Anne Lyken-Garner on Jan 6, 2008
I love the phrase ‘dip me under the moon’, very romantic
Dee Huff on Jan 6, 2008
Words that dance and sway. Very nice Liane.
Josey on Jan 7, 2008
The imagery is beautiful. I loved it.
Best Wishes, Josey
Jessica Fike on Jan 9, 2008
oh wow that was sooo fun to read, great poem!!!
Anthony M. McDonald on Jan 11, 2008
BEAUTIFUL! I especially like the title – “Dip Me Under the Moon” EXCELLENT!!!
Milton H Peebles III on Jan 24, 2009
Very Good!!!!! FIVE STARS!!!!!

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