Disappointment

Lady Sunshine on Nov 12, 2009

Tags: ashes, disappointment, Disenchanted, disheartened, disillusioned, falling, Hell, unfulfilled, Wishes

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Disenchanted…disillusioned…disheartened.

Disappointment falls
Like ashes falling from hell
Wishes unfulfilled

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Comments (9)

Teves on Nov 12, 2009
Nice one…
deep blue on Nov 12, 2009
I hope it’s not about Triond. If it is, you nipped it in the bud.
Shirley Shuler on Nov 12, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, a friend once said to me, his expectations were very low, that way he will never be disappointed…
Hansika on Nov 12, 2009
very good
Christine Ramsay on Nov 13, 2009
A short but powerful piece. Well done.

Christine
Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009
Yeah, a powerful piece.
Atanacio on Nov 13, 2009
Poor baby, come here u need a hug
ken bultman on Nov 13, 2009
You do nice work.l
V rank on Nov 18, 2009
Ouch… very painful… you need some inspiration and you better not expect too much for you to not get disappointed often.. Good Haiku…

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