Disenchanted…disillusioned…disheartened.

Disappointment falls
Like ashes falling from hell
Wishes unfulfilled

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  • Teves on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice one…

  • deep blue on Nov 12, 2009

    I hope it’s not about Triond. If it is, you nipped it in the bud.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 12, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, a friend once said to me, his expectations were very low, that way he will never be disappointed…

  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    very good

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 13, 2009

    A short but powerful piece. Well done.

    Christine

  • Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009

    Yeah, a powerful piece.

  • Atanacio on Nov 13, 2009

    Poor baby, come here u need a hug

  • ken bultman on Nov 13, 2009

    You do nice work.l

  • V rank on Nov 18, 2009

    Ouch… very painful… you need some inspiration and you better not expect too much for you to not get disappointed often.. Good Haiku…

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