Don’t mind the mess …

Blessed with kisses,

my sweet little misses

today ,ah

don’t mind the mess

forget the dishes

why wash cups,

when we could cleanse each other

soft kisses,

as we undress one another

happily aroused

the truth is rising

I am appetizing on the breast

as i put my size in

deep long stokes

reprimanding her juicy

as its dripping

from penetration

getting loose

see

in a hole other world

forget love making

I wanna f*#k !

have your body shaken

work your back

 till it feels it’s breaking

have your toes curled

as your nails scraping

my back as

your hips gyrating

to an explosion

of reasons why ,,,

you didn’t do the dishes

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Comments (17)
  • Darla Cooke on Jun 2, 2009

    Very interesting poem!

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 2, 2009

    Steamy. You and TOPELECTRICIAN should get together and write a book of steamy poems!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Mr Ghaz on Jun 2, 2009

    Excellent post!!..this is wonderful and lovely poem..I really liked it..Thanx for sharing this great work.

  • QuinMonty86 on Jun 2, 2009

    Very hot.

  • Princess Dre on Jun 2, 2009

    Okay Mr. Reed – Very Hot- Dishes huh?:)- I may have some DAWN for that- lol – Great and very spicy write – God Bless- much love – fan/friend for life – Princess Dre

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 2, 2009

    Take a cold shower then do those chores.

  • nekkoli on Jun 2, 2009

    Spicy, I write alot of them like this but no one reads them, I think it’s a double standard as if women don’t have a right to express their feelings this way….hummmph!Great d@m poetry!

  • Tracy Wootten on Jun 2, 2009

    This is hooooooooooooooooot

  • Lostash on Jun 2, 2009

    I never know what to expect from the title, but I know it’ll be a damn good poem every time.

  • Toni Love on Jun 2, 2009

    Forget the dishes…rewarding wishes! Great Work

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jun 2, 2009

    This is very erotic and sexy. Nice

  • California Dreamer on Jun 3, 2009

    I WOULD GIVE UP DOING MY DISHES FOR THIS ANYTIME !!! ;)

  • Duff D Moss on Jun 4, 2009

    I don\’t know about the dishes – but I think I need a cold shower.

  • Peter Cimino on Jun 4, 2009

    WOW! Quite the picture you painted here! Nicely done….

  • barbie on Jun 11, 2009

    hahahahahahah this is funny u little freak!!!!!!!!!!

  • clafleur on Jun 20, 2009

    I am a Christian and I cannot comment, but I read your work. Keep writing what you are feeling.

  • Linda Lori on Jul 24, 2009

    Did somebody say dishes? What dishes? Fully passionate and a stimulating read!

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