Disobeying God What God intended and we denied it.


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Disobeying God

Now you know

Why all people

Don’t follow God fully

Nudity wow,

That’s lovely.

So what’s next?

God wanted us to be free

But mankind has chained all of us

So dare not talk of nudity

As God may be angry

For not following

The tale of Adam and Eve

Born totally nude and free

So don’t lament nor grieve

For your much desired

Nudity

 

 

 

 

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  • Darla Cooke on Mar 9, 2010

    Interesting poem.

  • Hepsi.M on Mar 9, 2010

    good one

  • ashan1614 on Mar 9, 2010

    I supposed had Adam and Eve not disobeyed God, we might all still be nude and totally unaware and unashamed. But alas, we have loss that freedom, our dominion over all the creatures of the earth, and our rightful place in the Kingdom due to disobedience.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 9, 2010

    I don\’t know what to say but sometimes life is much more than belief.

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 9, 2010

    Rather interesting concept LH.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 10, 2010

    … it\’s all been downhill from there! Very interesting LH and nice choice of picture!

  • albert1jemi on Mar 11, 2010

    nice share

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