Dispersed

foxpete88 on Oct 15, 2011

Tags: art, Dispersed, Dreams, poems, soul is wasted

Soul is wasted.

year after year, I love the planting
just last night, you pull the roots
hempaskan me, give yourself an injury
destroy my life, my heart hurt
my soul seemed to float
broke all expectations
all my dreams stopped
what a pain of feeling hearts
when my soul is wasted

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Rosettaartist1 on Oct 15, 2011
Nicely written
girishpuri on Oct 15, 2011
nice poem
LadyElena on Oct 15, 2011
Interesting poem – soul can be restored though…

Take care.
bolive on Oct 15, 2011
You have a wonderful gift of writing poems!
KittyK on Oct 15, 2011
Smile and be happy…hearts can be mended!
erwinkennythomas on Oct 16, 2011
nice share!
VoIP on Oct 16, 2011
Ditto what KittyK said.

But very well written. You have talent….
dwisuka on Oct 16, 2011
nice….
ittech on Oct 17, 2011
gifted writer
Elle64 on Oct 18, 2011
very nice.
reiny on Oct 18, 2011
sound so sad
Kristie Claar on Oct 26, 2011
nice work
Dreamy777 on Dec 10, 2011
very nice work
arifeen on Mar 24, 2012
Nice!

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