I don’t like feeling displeased.

I like you least

when you make me

open my eyes

and force me to see

all of the things

that leave me displeased

because all of your promises

I truly believed

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  • Kanzaki on Feb 22, 2011

    It’s short, but I enjoy it’s message. I feel kinda the same. Maybe a bit of inspiration for my next poem? Thanks for sharing.

  • Cuissade Mission on Feb 22, 2011

    Ignorance is not bliss. Maybe he loves you enough to show you what you need to see so you are clear on what you are getting yourself into.

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