Please meet my distant cousin, she looks quite different.

I saw a picture in my mind
My mother holding hands
With her mother
And her mother with hers and so on

Their arms outstretch
They formed a line
Stretching far into the distance
A line two hundred miles long

Mother, grandmother, grand, great grand
A quarter million ‘grands’ in all
A quarter million generations
In years perhaps six million

I waked that line and saw them change
Stature shortened, slightly stooping
Coarser facial features
Much more body hair

And then a mother held the hands of two
Identical twins they were
One standing clearly in the first line
The other starting a line all her own

I followed now that second line
Back toward where I’d started
And compared the two lines side by side
The further I walked the greater difference

I am approaching now where I began
I see my mother standing there
And by her side my distant cousin
A full grown chimpanzee

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Comments (5)
  • diamondpoet on Nov 24, 2009

    Good discription of the family tree, and nice write.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 24, 2009

    I dont get it.

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 25, 2009

    good ending you chose :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 25, 2009

    Wow! I wondered what was coming. That was really inspiring.
    Well done.

    Christine

  • Snooky on Nov 25, 2009

    Hey Hey Hey! what chu say.
    Love it.

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