A journey we must all take at some time…

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Look into my eyes and i will bring you to a place,few have seen

Countless have travelled and dwell there in broken dream

They remain there with shattered hearts,fear and lost in pain

Yesteryears have passed and are in the now a distant plains

Far away in the future there is a blinding glimmer of hope

Many who choose it fear they cannot cope

A chosen few reach out and swim away from all the floods of tears

While others watch in disbelief.blinded by their own greif and fears

The swim is great,but the hope is greater for something more

Take a chance my friends and swim to the distant shore..

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  • Darla Cooke on Jul 13, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Francy on Jul 21, 2009

    I agree… Well done.
    Keep sharing

  • Jane Jane on Sep 6, 2009

    brilliant one. I like the idea of your poem..=)

  • Dena McCusker on Sep 12, 2009

    well written, I do believe sometimes everyone needs to take a chance. beautiful words

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