Do Less Gain More

M A Bhanpurwala on Feb 17, 2009

Tags: acquiring, arguing, complaining, complimenting, controlling, criticizing, forgiveness, Poetry, running around, silence, stillness, talking, thinking

Do less, gain more this is a magic.

Do Less
Do less thinking,
and pay more attention to your heart.
Do less acquiring,
and pay more attention to what you already have.
Do less complaining,
and pay more attention to giving.
Do less controlling,
and pay more attention to letting go.
Do less criticizing,
and pay more attention to complimenting.
Do less arguing,
and pay more attention to forgiveness.
Do less running around,
and pay more attention to stillness.
Do less talking,
and pay more attention to silence.

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spencerc on Feb 17, 2009
Very nicely written and oh so true.
Betty Carew on Feb 17, 2009
Absolutely beautiful Bo good advice for all.
renita on Feb 17, 2009
that is a mouthful! very well expressed
Darla Smith on Feb 17, 2009
Wonderful poem with great advice!
Emma J Kerry on Feb 17, 2009
Beautiful and very sound advice which we should all try and follow.
QuinMonty86 on Feb 17, 2009
Very good advice and nicely written.
S Air on Feb 17, 2009
Beautiful poem.
maranatha on Feb 17, 2009
This needs to be framed and hanging on the wall. thank you!
Sandra Tapia on Feb 17, 2009
Great words of wisdom!
nesita on Feb 17, 2009
well said!
Damon Reichardt on Feb 17, 2009
do more poetry like this
and pay more into the Karma bank!
CutestPrincess on Feb 18, 2009
youre getting better in writing…
Mr Ghaz on Feb 18, 2009
Great work! Nicely done and very attractive words as well. Well done and thanks for sharing
Maria Blazz on Feb 19, 2009
Sounds like a good philosophy of life!
Blue Buttefly on Feb 19, 2009
beautifully done!
M.A Bhanpurwala on Feb 19, 2009
fine
jo oliver on Feb 21, 2009
Great job and usage.
Carolyn Cordon on Feb 21, 2009
What fantastic words! Less is certainly more.
meandu on Feb 22, 2009
This rang very true for me. Thank you for sharing.
poetic enigma on Feb 22, 2009
Yes, very true words,
and said so well,
great poem here,
very nicely done (:
Denise Kawaii on Feb 23, 2009
Great poem, and great advice.
Ruby Hawk on Feb 23, 2009
You brobably have something there. If we listen instead of talking we will learn a lot more.
OhSugar on Feb 24, 2009
very nice poem. I love all the postive suggestions.
denus on Feb 24, 2009
brilliant, poem
trishia on Feb 25, 2009
This is sound advice-worth bookmarking. Thank you for this heartfelt write.
Intrepidus on Mar 4, 2009
Wow! Advice in a poem! Those were very true.. Nice one!
32 BarClay on Mar 4, 2009
This should be our anthem for 2009, good work!
Tusaani on Mar 4, 2009
Absolutely true! Great poem.
Sakuragi on Mar 5, 2009
Do less! That’s a good thing to remember. Very nice!
Fresh Writing on Apr 16, 2009
Very good…a spin on today’s world.

-Fresh Writing
nutuba on Apr 16, 2009
Pay more attention to silence … great advice!
nutuba on Apr 16, 2009
Pay more attention to silence … great advice!
Westbrook on Apr 17, 2009
Great advice.
cleblanc on Apr 17, 2009
great write. love this.
writing4angels on Apr 18, 2009
this is really good advice.
Bo Russo on Apr 21, 2009
What a great message.

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