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Do Not Give Up

leorona on Oct 15, 2010
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DO NOT GIVE UP.

DO NOT GIVE UP

That hurt
Abandoned
That leaves
Who scratched his heart

Which must survive in the difference
That should stand against the meaning of life
Do not ever blame LOVE

Life must be rolling
Do not ever give up

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  • strategy03 on Oct 17, 2010

    Great writing. I like this

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 17, 2010

    Love is always the winner, even when it loses.

    I like the line: Do not ever blame LOVE

    Nice poem Sir. Thanks for sharing!!!

  • overclocked on Oct 17, 2010

    what a poet

  • Angela Ohm on Oct 17, 2010

    Wonderful poem ! I love this line “Do not ever blame LOVE” and I agree completely.

    Angela

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