Holiday blues and anguish.

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Do they know it’s Christmas?

“Hurry up, your father’ll

be here soon,” mom says,

staring at the Christmas flotsam,

of ribbons, bows, and tattered

red and green wrapping paper

scattered throughout

the living room;

it’s not even noon

and she’s already gone through

half a bottle of Vodka

and her Johnny Cash collection.

It’s not that she hates

this arrangement-

my brother and I spending

half the day with his side

of the family;

maybe it wouldn’t sting so much

if he only coughed up

a little more child support.

My brother and I fidget in our

new clothes waiting for dad

to pick us up-

not sure what the drinking is about

and why we have to dress up;

we’re just going to spend the

afternoon with our grandparents.

and get more presents.

Later, when we come home

her and a friend have polished off

that bottle of Vodka and are

working on another.

“Did he give you any money?”

she asks, picking at some leftover

turkey and dressing her friend

had brought over.

We shake our heads and commence

playing with our new toys around

the Christmas tree.

“Damn him.”

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  • cardy on Nov 23, 2009

    Wow what a write it\’s sad to think that somewere out there this is a normal xmass for some a powerful write my friend.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 23, 2009

    This piece really brings home how a family breakdown affects the family. A very good write.

    Christine

  • ashan1614 on Nov 23, 2009

    Happens more than we know. Sad portrait of Christmas. Great write, Papa!

  • ken bultman on Nov 23, 2009

    What a write!!! I hope everyone who has had such an experience can shake it from their memory this holiday.

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 23, 2009

    Damn Jeffery. What a depressing picture. Powerfully written. Not from experience, I hope.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 23, 2009

    Sometimes childhood holiday memories are less than beautiful, but it’s a good thing we have our whole lives to make new ones! Great write!

  • Marie Antoinette on Nov 23, 2009

    Wow, sad but what a good write!

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 23, 2009

    Great emotion in your write! sad but beautiful. Thank you for sharing with such nice words.

  • Themax on Nov 23, 2009

    That’s a beautiful pic and reall great to read,Thanks :)

  • Joe Dorish on Nov 23, 2009

    Too bad this is reality for some kids over the holidays.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 23, 2009

    Oh, the poor little innocent children. What a world we live in.

  • Aleena on Nov 23, 2009

    That was depressing.. Just shows how great a writer you are, to enable your readers to get a strong emotional response. Great write, its too bad thats really how some kids spend christmas though.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 23, 2009

    It doesn’t have to be like that when parents seperate, but so often the kids needs and feelings get lost.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 23, 2009

    It doesn\’t have to be like that when parents seperate, but so often the kids needs and feelings get lost.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 23, 2009

    You paint a very depressing picture of Christmas, Papa. This is so sad but for many it is a reality!!

  • Yovita Siswati on Nov 24, 2009

    deppresing piece! so sad that it happens more often now.

  • shanthu on Nov 24, 2009

    great share….thanks

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