A question asked many times,in many ways, by many people.

Do you really know me?

Do you really know my mind?

Have I let you enter my world?

Do I have you all entwined?

With my thoughts, my views, my temptation

Or do I remain to you blind?

My own slant on life’s Imagination

Just one of the many mankind’s

Or have I lost you completely

Never to know me at all

Looking through windows discreetly

To the dancers at a masquerade ball

Have I opened myself like a bible?

Spreading my words to my flock

In a way we are all very tribal

With a key findings things to unlock

Clinging to what we know best

Scared to venture afar

Do you really, truly know me?

Do any of you know what we are?

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  • diamondpoet on Feb 7, 2010

    Nice flow and enjoyable read, no one really knows I agree.

  • amandeep13 on Feb 7, 2010

    Great Work

    Well Done

  • standingproud on Feb 7, 2010

    So true
    No I don\’t really know you.
    But what I do know is your in my computer
    and you make comments on my work, that is wonderful.

    I know you like to write, and take ducks on a journey,
    eat mushrooms I am sure of that,lol.
    your romantic and funny.
    From you pictures I think you are from England.
    Talk of history as if you have been their.
    A talent you show, but who really are you???

  • stryka66 on Feb 7, 2010

    Great reflective writing

  • albert1jemi on Feb 7, 2010

    Good one

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 7, 2010

    Great one! Its interesting.. keep it up. N thanks for the post,also go tru the one which I recently posted.. Thanks!!!

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 7, 2010

    We only think we know others until they prove us wrong. The photo is a perfect match for the text.

  • joyhyena29 on Feb 7, 2010

    well done^^

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 7, 2010

    Very good poem!

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 7, 2010

    Question is, do you know yourself? Reflective piece, Johnny.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 7, 2010

    i know you not

    as much as u know me not

    but i forgot

    in my mind u\\\’re a lot

    and i too hope

    i am also

    not nought

    do u know me at all?????

  • sweet sunshine143 on Feb 7, 2010

    I agree with Guy. It\\\’s funny how people think they know us. I have proved so many wrong. Nobody needs to know who you are unless you really trust them. Good one.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 8, 2010

    liked it very much..nice share..

  • sambhafusia on Feb 8, 2010

    nice flow…great

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 9, 2010

    Nice one…great….

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