Traditional 5/7/5 haiku.

 

Sick patients await

Harassed doctors to cure

Chronic diseases.

 

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  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 31, 2009

    There was certainly a queue at the doctor’s this morning, lol. Nice work.

    Christine

  • albert1jemi on Dec 31, 2009

    thats true. happy new year

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 31, 2009

    Very accurate, seeing a doctor still involves a lot of waiting!

  • speckledlily on Dec 31, 2009

    I agree with Frances Lawrence.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 1, 2010

    That’s true…nice…

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