A poem born of conscious streaming.

There are malicious men of mud; ruddy

And they are steadily running to bind you with their bedtime stories

and fables

Dizzying women with their false axioms

They lay hold of you by the heart strings and bruised ankles

With their wet soil slick and dirty plans

Thick and treacherous and impossible

And muddied hands

The diametrical, and as such reasonably remarkable?

Is this truth that on its own merit stands

That there is love too waiting to hold you

A love that can iron away the dog eared pages of your book

Replace the jewel that carelessly they took

And although you run with feet shod with several holes

In the soles of your self esteem

Carry on without a word, a noted gesture or look

For love, it itself will come at you from many angles

A perfect scene of things not being as they appear;

What they seem

For if the world only really knew

It’s very foundation could proverbially be shook

Because you may run from love, but to be quickly caught is your fondest dream

Copyright ©2011 by j. k. Bradford, All Rights Reserved

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  • Butterfly Musings on Mar 12, 2011

    very very nice

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 12, 2011

    Thanks Cassandra.

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 12, 2011

    Great read

  • lapasan on Mar 12, 2011

    Nice poem. I like it.

  • webseowriters on Mar 12, 2011

    A nice entry

  • pattiann on Mar 12, 2011

    Excellent

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 12, 2011

    Thanks everyone. Actually, I like this one too. I dont often like my work,so I post everything as a consequence.

  • lillyrose on Mar 12, 2011

    Loved the title and the way you entwined it into the poem Jerry

  • Adrn0919 on Mar 12, 2011

    A very true observation. With my self esteem shattered I thought I was not lovable but it came forward from an unexpected source. I love the way this is written. Thank you again for sharing.

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 12, 2011

    Very nice poem!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 12, 2011

    Thanks everyone.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 12, 2011

    Adrian,

    I am sure you were to do personal inventory, you would find yourself surrounded by loving friends and family both spiritual and physical.

  • Tulan on Mar 13, 2011

    Lovely, your poetry is heart catching.

  • Inna Tysoe on Mar 15, 2011

    Thanks for that

  • T. S. Lewis on Mar 17, 2011

    I need to study this one my friend. Well done.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 17, 2011

    Thanks guys for commenting!

  • Audrey Howitt on Mar 20, 2011

    You express yourself so well. So clearly. Great imagery!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 20, 2011

    It is nice of you to say so, thanks Ms. Hewitt.

  • SongbirdB on Mar 21, 2011

    Wonderful imagery…you truly write from the heart…I am enjoying your work my friend…

  • Humperdinky on Mar 23, 2011

    Lovely poem. Before the page loaded, I thought it was going to be a poem complaining about people who bend the corners of pages in books ;)

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 16, 2011

    Thank you ladies for commenting.

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