Doleful Rain

Sheila M on Jun 28, 2009

Tags: doleful, Poetry, poetry graphic, Rain, sorrowful

Poetry graphic about the rain.

outside
the rain repents
as it slides from the eaves
sultry, seductive salivation
its biting
is no longer captivating
as it only extinguishes the fire
your aqueous attraction
only
leaves me feeling soppy
wrapped up
in your dank
and dismal
gloom

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ken bultman on Jun 28, 2009
Wow! Getting fancy. Beautiful words and fancy artwork as well. Impress me some more.
Lostash on Jun 28, 2009
Yes, I agree!!
Christine Ramsay on Jun 28, 2009
I love the way you have presented this poem. Beautiful words too.

Christine
goodselfme on Jun 28, 2009
Very nicely done with words and presentation. Good work!
Elizabeth Abbott on Jun 28, 2009
Nice presentation. Liz
Mr Ghaz on Jun 28, 2009
Excellent!..this is really wonderful and magnificent poem..I LOV it..well done and thanx for sharing this cool stuff.
Will Gray on Jun 28, 2009
Love the intro! Great work!
aristate on Jun 28, 2009
I love it
clay hurtubise on Jun 28, 2009
Nice job incorporating the picture.
Thanks,
Clay
Joie Schmidt on Jun 28, 2009
Wonderful………*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Poetic Enigma on Jun 28, 2009
I like this, I thought of putting a poem on a picture like that, but never have.
That is cool that you have, and it’s a wonderful write
Tanya Wallace on Jun 28, 2009
Absolutely brilliant work.I simply love this,original and very creative.
Ruby Hawk on Jun 28, 2009
loved it,
irishpen on Jun 28, 2009
Gorgeous all around
chanbox on Jun 28, 2009
just a beautiful poem. I like the poem in the picture too
Hazel Crowther on Jun 29, 2009
Very impressive artwork, gives it a great feel.
Francy on Jun 29, 2009
like it…
Keep sharing.
kate smedley on Jun 30, 2009
The artwork is beautiful and the mood of the poem fits it perfectly. Lovely work.
Peter Cimino on Jul 2, 2009
You make rain seem very HOTTT…if you know what I mean! Incredible piece of work!! xoxo
CutestPrincess on Jul 11, 2009
artistic with real words conveying vivid image

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