Going in the dollar store to spend dollars.

You go in the Dollar Store

You wanna hollar

Then pop your collar

So, someone else will follower

Because you need to spend the dollars

Hope you will stall

To return too the Dollar Store

and spend more dollars.

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  • pattiann on Mar 16, 2010

    I like this because I adore dollar stores! We buy most of our cleaning products for A LOT cheaper than regular stores. I also buy books at good prices there.
    Good poem!

  • lillyrose on Mar 16, 2010

    LOL… I see the recession is not bothering you! nice poem

  • cardy on Mar 16, 2010

    Like this a lot a good write and enjoyed the read In my case it would be a pound shop lol I enjoy shopping in them to!

  • Atanacio on Mar 16, 2010

    cute write the dollar store who could ask for anything more

  • overwings on Mar 16, 2010

    Yes obviously that\’s the way they are called there. Like the one pound shops, the “everything for 100″, or 1€ shops.

  • j p gallagher on Mar 16, 2010

    Very Nice, LOL

  • diamondpoet on Mar 16, 2010

    I hate the dollar store, because I don’t ever stop picking up items.

  • JannyCZ on Mar 16, 2010

    cute

  • Lord Banks on Mar 16, 2010

    Get cheap stuff in those shops, nice poem keep it up. LB

  • drelayaraja on Mar 16, 2010

    Nice poem :)

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 16, 2010

    Very enjoyable..:)

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 16, 2010

    Cute piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 16, 2010

    Am a little numbed.

  • Literatour on Mar 16, 2010

    Very nice !!

  • Judy Kaelin on Mar 16, 2010

    Very nice!

  • petercurtis97 on Mar 16, 2010

    Good to see you ggot plenty of spare dollars to shop with

  • RS Wing on Mar 16, 2010

    Nice little piece!

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 16, 2010

    Holla for a dolla =) I love going to the Dollar store but I do end up buying more than what I need.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 16, 2010

    we call em two dollar shops here,
    I go there all the time,
    coz things are not so dear,
    for a few dollars and a dime…..

    This a very good poem you have here Going to do a copy and dedicate it to you…….Thanks for the sharing and inspiration….

  • yes me on Mar 16, 2010

    Yet an other add for the stores like it Cee G
    Good play on the words…. cheers

  • Inna Tysoe on Mar 16, 2010

    Good one.

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 17, 2010

    swagger like toi!

  • wonder on Mar 17, 2010

    A great one to share.

  • sambhafusia on Mar 17, 2010

    Great share..keep work on dear..

  • shivaleen on Mar 17, 2010

    Very well writing

  • Tina Cassello on Mar 17, 2010

    I am a fan of dollar stores too. They are the one place I can shop at and not feel guilty about spending money, because you get so much for so little. But it does often become things you don’t need
    like 8Shei8 said above.

  • Hettie on Mar 17, 2010

    As Stan said here its the $2 shop or not only $2 shop, even so its a great place to pick up odds and ends like a chicken that you wind up and it runs about, Just right to give a child to play with.Safer than the real thing for the chickens sake.

  • moneynwealth on Mar 17, 2010

    nice poem, the dollar store.
    :) good health and success,
    moneynwealth

  • R G Lowry on Mar 18, 2010

    Spending is so easy :)

  • CA Johnson on Mar 18, 2010

    I really enjoyed your poem. I love to shop at dollar stores so I can really relate to it.

  • Moses Ingram on Mar 19, 2010

    Thanks for this.

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