Dolphin,What! You are no dolphin, you are very much more human than most,
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Dolphin,What!

You are no dolphin,

You are very much

More human than most,

As negativity breeds

Negative vibrations,

Ere with my poetic deliberations,

I treat you

Do two things.

First remove your logo,

Show a bright and lovely Rose,

If your original face

You’d like not to expose.

 

Then change your peyoname

As I say,

You are no dolphin

In any blasted way.

They are fish with a womb  

Mammals in the form of human comb

But you are a complete

Wholly fully matured being

With greater intelligence 

Than any ones indulgence.

 

One day I shall add

An ‘S’

And they all shall yell,

She talks and she walks,

Who’s that saint can some one tell,

Who removed that pseudo dolphin?

From this mental hell

 

I wait that day,

Which may not be far away?

I don’t let people stray,

Those who come

To seek my lovely scientific way

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  • Stotinka5 on Nov 27, 2010

    nice!!! love dolphins…think they are really more clever than us :)

  • The Quail 1957 on Nov 27, 2010

    Cool poem; please remember to read a few of my article and post a comment or two… Thank you

  • Teves on Nov 27, 2010

    Nice one…

  • lapasan on Nov 27, 2010

    what is a peyoname? it’s not in the dictionary.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 27, 2010

    i coin my own words
    just imagine MARILYN Monoroe/SEE
    !!!MONROE
    say
    what’s your penname
    and twill beocme
    somewhat like this

    what’s ur peoo name..
    Colonel lapa sang

  • Mr.Reggie on Nov 27, 2010

    Excellent Write!!

  • bobie on Nov 27, 2010

    wow . .thanks for the share

  • coffeeadict on Nov 27, 2010

    Great, I love it.

  • Aiyanna. on Nov 27, 2010

    I am a Rainbow
    I am a Rose
    From today
    I will be Rainbow Rose
    Never will I my face
    To anyone show
    Although in life
    Many doth know.
    One in life you
    Too shall know.

  • Kaye TM on Nov 27, 2010

    excellent share!

  • Aiyanna. on Nov 27, 2010

    Contrary to what I said, I come again as DolRose. Here is my new name and my looks.

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