Don’t Break Them

Starpisces on Nov 17, 2009

Tags: don't break, heart, pain, promise, relation, trust

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A quote by Charles Dickens…

You can break a glass

But never break your trust

Promise you can’t keep

It should not be made

Relation which you bond

You should keep it strong

Heart is very fragile

Breaks easily like a vase

Don’t break these four things, though they never complain

But once they are broken, they are in great pain!

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Comments (20)

Jenny Heart on Nov 17, 2009
Well done!
abhishek40914 on Nov 17, 2009
nice one
wonder on Nov 17, 2009
A very good message.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009
A lovely piece. Well done.

Christine
Darla Smith on Nov 17, 2009
So very true!
Themax on Nov 17, 2009
very well said my friend and well written poem too!!!
I will never break them It’s a promise,Thank you for sharing
Teves on Nov 17, 2009
Nice post Starpisces…
Mystify on Nov 17, 2009
Wonderful work Star! This is so very true!!
Eunice Tan on Nov 17, 2009
So true…
Lachu on Nov 18, 2009
very well written….thanks for the share…cheers
cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009
A great piece of work..Star *
LOVELY HONEY on Nov 18, 2009
thanks for your poem

ur an inspiration

please read my comment

as a new poem

trust ….relationship…heart
but no promise

lovely lovely
vycess on Nov 19, 2009
i love it…
martinpm on Nov 19, 2009
Great piece of work.
Hazel Crowther on Nov 20, 2009
Nice words.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 20, 2009
very true,
Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009
well said.
CA Johnson on Nov 21, 2009
I really like this poem, starpisces. I love the message behind the poem. You really should learn to keep your word if you’re going to do something.
palak2008 on Nov 23, 2009
Great post….
Annashank on Nov 25, 2009
Very well said!!!

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