Don’t Loosen Yet

LOVELY HONEY on Oct 22, 2009

Tags: diamond, Jewelry vigin, Shopping

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You are a loser only when you become looser.

Don’t loosen

When one who is loose

Will lose

None can say

When the looser one

Doesn’t lose

Becomes tight once again

Who can say?

None again

So be loose

Or be tight

Never lose

Your mind either way

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Comments (11)

ceegirl on Oct 22, 2009
love the poem
cebuanaeyez on Oct 22, 2009
I have an idea what you are referring to…
Petalm on Oct 22, 2009
I like this one.
Mr Ghaz on Oct 22, 2009
nice one..lovely poem..I liked it! cheers
alc on Oct 22, 2009
Another great write!
raman13 on Oct 22, 2009
excellent

best regards
wonder on Oct 22, 2009
The pun was intelligent.Will follow your advice.
johnnydod on Oct 23, 2009
Lovely honey just lovely
Darla Smith on Oct 23, 2009
Nice poem.
Jane Jane on Oct 23, 2009
nice poem.
CA Johnson on Oct 23, 2009
I really liked your poem.

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