Don’t You Dare!

Ash E. on Apr 12, 2010

Poem to all lovers, past and future.

Don’t tell your friends,

about the two of us,

when we have an intimate encounter.

You might think we won’t find out,

but no matter how good of a friend,

you think that you have,

trust me, they’ll want me to,

be with them, like I was with you.

Do that to me, you’ll rip me in two.

You’ll break my heart,

and I’ll feel used,

simply because, you wanted your friend,

to be envious and amused.

Never again, will I want to be with you,

don’t try and tape us,

because I know that you’ll share,

our most intimate moments,

as soon as I’m not there.

So listen to my plea carefully,

a TRUE gentlemen never talks.

We can tell, by the look in your eyes,

and your “so called friends” taunts.

Keep our pleasures and desires,

between just the two of us,

unless you want me to leave you behind,

I promise you, then you’ll feel lost.

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Comments (5)

Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 12, 2010
Very well written.
drelayaraja on Apr 12, 2010
Great write
jimbob1 on Apr 12, 2010
Ash…I like this poem a great deal…believe the saying (walls have eyes and friends have loose lips)…there is no such thing as a secret love affair because as soon as one person is jilted they are very apt to blab just to get even…There are a lot of very wise words penned here and I voted that I Like It as a result of the careful composition…great job…thanks
Parabola on Apr 13, 2010
Ash E.

This is a great message not only to your past and future lovers but to every man who thinks about talking to their friends about any inimate moment with a woman. It is something a lot men should wake up to, IT\’S SIMPLY JUST NOT RIGHT!

Well crafted as always and a pleasure to read.

—>~<— Till we meet again within the flowing waters of our words,

your friend,

~CJM
Peter Cimino on Apr 13, 2010
I love this! You are so right about true gentlemen. Nicely done!

Hi there!