Don’t you see it?

Please look deep into my eyes.
See behind the me I show and look into my eyes.
Please tell me what you see there.
You will know how much I care.
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I can only answer what you ask.
I can only tell you what you want to know.
I will do all that I can to let it show.
But I can only tell you what you want to know.
 
It has been a very long/short life.
Constantly fighting for my life
Dreams they come and dreams they go.
Don't you see it, doesn't it show?
 
Please look into my eyes, my feelings I‘ll share.
How deep my heart loves, how much I care.
I want you to see...I want you to know.
You have to look for it to show.
 
Don't you see it?
 
All the pain I’ve felt, the tears I've cried,
All the days I wished I could have died.
Looking for the soul who would join with me.
The soul that could love me...as I am, and because I am me.
 
When it happens, you will know.
Far from beyond the years it willl begin to grow.
Yes you will see me breakdown and cry,
For then I will have an angel stolen from the sky.
 
Don’t you see it?
 
I really don't know how to show
Even though I want and need for you to know.
The lengths I've gone to make love work,
All the years of heartache, pain and hurt.
 
The years don't haunt me, they are in the past.
Do not be afraid to want me or make love last.
To be in your life as a lover or friend.
All you see now is the results, the wonderful end.
 
Don’t you see it?
 
Years swimming up against raging river streams.
In an endless pursuit of the love of my dreams.
Against a river that just grew stronger it seemed.
I never gave up because I always knew
I'd eventually find a woman, who would love me true.
 
I have so many tears left unshed
Because no matter how many millions I’ve bled,
I have always saved some for the destined day
The day when I meet the woman who will wash them away.
 
Someday it will happen…
Someday you will see….
That I have found true love and it has found me….
And finally…finally…I will know…
 
Don't you see it??!!
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Comments (7)
  • GodsGrace on Aug 28, 2010

    Great Work

  • zulfiqarali5 on Aug 28, 2010

    gud work !

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 29, 2010

    Very nice, its good to see you posting beautiful poetry again.

  • Tina Cassello on Aug 29, 2010

    Your poems speak for me and I am always encouraged when I read them. If I am feeling down and read the love that comes from your poems I feel like you are writing them to me and it really makes me feel much better. I wish I did have someone in my life to write me such poems so I wouldn’t have to pretend.

  • PSingh1990 on Aug 31, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 2, 2010

    Good one.. I liked the way you said, “It has been a very long/short life”.. Odd, but so true!

  • gaby7 on Sep 2, 2010

    Very moving!

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