A box sent with much love and care.

it varies in sizes
small, medium,large
with items from the cheapest
to the most expensive ones
from the very common
to the most unique products
from the least noticed
to the most recent trends
from the very ordinary
to the most special presents
from the smallest details
to the most urgent needs
as it reaches the very door
of the target destination
it brings utmost joy to anyone
with smiles seen on their faces
where spark of excitement shines
and heartfelt expressions of gratitude
are really beyond measure
as they come together to open
the priceless door-to-door box
sent from heart-to-heart

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  • Sakuragi on Feb 24, 2009

    This is nice!

  • miraj on Feb 24, 2009

    Hi,

    This was charmingly unique in presentation and style.keep writing.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,kris
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • papaleng on Feb 24, 2009

    You have a novel way of presenting your work. You did conveyed your thoughts clearly.

  • monica55 on Feb 24, 2009

    A lovely thought and nicely expressed.
    Monica

  • Anne McNew on Feb 24, 2009

    this is nice miss kris.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 25, 2009

    so true, I can relate!

  • kenneth on Feb 26, 2009

    well expressed and written. I like it.

  • kiPZ on Feb 28, 2009

    door to door

    open to open

    find to find

    wat i can get

    this is me

    the one finding

    finding something

    that i can use

    i must be quick

    so ill b lucky

    its nice to see

    a chocolate

    made in Japan

    sent by my mother

    and my father

    thanks for that

    i am now happy

    ok ba ma?? may pinagmanahan ba??

  • kris miyasako on Mar 2, 2009

    thank yoy kips for your wonderful message. i love son.

  • fsm1003 on Mar 3, 2009

    wow nice piece!

  • Victoria M. Atok on Dec 22, 2009

    sis kris,

    truly your gift is a gift to others. pls continue to be a blessing. i have just read your poem again. -__-

  • CHIPMUNK on Sep 14, 2011

    Wow!! Awesome share

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