Put your mind at ease and erase your doubts…

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Do not let it play,
Do not doubt what I have to say,
For if you doubt me,
I wouldn’t have the easiest time of day…

Do not give in to those,
Those doubts that are lingering inside your head,
Resurfacing everything,
Just let it rest…

Grey clouds,
It’s me now having doubts,
Doubts that are not getting out,
I’ve always wanted to think out loud,
And clear away the doubts…

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  • Darla Cooke on Jun 23, 2009

    I have doubts that I wish I could clear away.

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 23, 2009

    me too .. :(

  • Francy on Jun 23, 2009

    very good poem…
    Keep sharing.

  • J L Williams on Jun 23, 2009

    A poem that speaks to all I believe, there ain’t no doubting that!

  • Tanya Wallace on Jun 23, 2009

    Great poem about something so real,everyone has doubts and I believe everyone would like to say how they feel but most just keep it inside.Excellent subject,creative and wonderfully pieced together.

  • Trinket on Jun 23, 2009

    This is a very nice poem. It makes you think about how many times you doubt yourself or others. Interesting picture also :-)

  • RS Wing on Jun 23, 2009

    very cool, your prose is realism, great work…also like the image you attached too your piece

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 23, 2009

    Gotta wipe those suckers out and stay aware of the present.The past is gone and the future isn’t here yet so all we need think about is the present.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 23, 2009

    This is a feeling that I think most people can relate too – nice work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • StumbleUponWriter on Jun 23, 2009

    Awesome comments, friends..
    I like the way you guys think about the topic Doubts..
    Thanks for sharing your ideas and insights..

  • kate smedley on Jun 24, 2009

    I think everyone can relate to this, nice poem.

  • irishpen on Jun 24, 2009

    Kudos.

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 25, 2009

    Thanks, Kate and irishpen.. ;)

  • Nisa West on Jun 25, 2009

    When I forget to be present the doubts surface… Thanks for the reminder- nice poem!

  • Ai0no801 on Jun 27, 2009

    wow i can never stop reading this….

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