Lessons of fear, discovery of joy.

Lessons taught in the basement
had hints of dark on the edges,
smiles, considered suspicious,
seemed always mistaken, there.

Upstairs, each message more dire,
beginnings and middles would vary
but endings were always the same,
we would burn and be forsaken
for ever and all of time,
at a drop of transgression’s hat.

Rewards carried frames of terror
to hang upon bedroom walls,
reminders of narrow escapes.
Dread warnings were proven to be
too effective, unquestionably,
a boy turned away in dismay.

No path would there be to follow
as the young man stumbled about
tripping from badlands to barrens,
he struggled alone and confused
through ages of sputtering growth,
to a fall in the middle, face down.

At last overcome by exhaustion,
assistance accepted from Christ,
he stood up again, and was me.
a startling new revelation
washed away fears of the past
I laughed for all I had missed.

I wonder sometimes of that church
and the spiritual meals they fed,
angst or despair were main courses
but no joy ran over their cups.

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Comments (11)
  • stryka66 on Jul 26, 2009

    Well Done, Casey – you capture the essence of Christ-less religion very well – fear & more fear…there is a more excellent way.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 26, 2009

    “Rewards carried frames of terror” I think that is my favorite line. The beauty of eternal life totally lost because it is always presented as only a secondary choice to fearsome hell fire.

  • Jonie on Jul 26, 2009

    I know all about Christ-less-religion!
    You have described it very well!

  • kate smedley on Jul 27, 2009

    I love the way you close this poem in particular ‘no joy ran over their cups’. Beautifully done.

  • papaleng on Jul 27, 2009

    good words and your thought is clearly stated.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 27, 2009

    Faith by fear. I wonder how many people have been driven away from religion by this alone over the years

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 27, 2009

    More are being driven away every day.Maybe some day we will be allowed to live our lives in our own light without Dogma. I do it now, but so many people are afraid of the disaproval of the church they have been raised to respect.

  • revivor on Jul 28, 2009

    thoughtprovoking – and some great lines
    “Rewards carried frames of terror
    to hang upon bedroom walls”
    loved it!!

  • clafleur on Jul 31, 2009

    i dropped by to view your work because you were highly recommended by someone. Glad 2 see you write from a spititual angle.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Aug 23, 2009

    Very well-written description of a form of spirituality, yet lacking in grace and love. I’m also familiar with such teachings. Lovely work, Casey.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Aug 27, 2009

    A very touching piece, Casey.

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