Two high school boys go fishing down at Butch’s pond and quickly catch their fill. But that’s not the end of the story …

I got a call from Marty
‘Bout half past noon
He said he’s goin’ fishin’
And he’s goin’ real soon
The catfish are bitin’
They’re bitin’ real good
Down at Butch’s pond
Away out in the woods
We loaded up the pickup
We had our poles and bait
We drove real fast to Butch’s pond
We really couldn’t wait
The catfish are bitin’
They’re bitin’ real good
Down at Butch’s pond
Away out in the woods
Marty got the first bite
And then I got two more
And after just a little while
He caught him number four
The catfish are bitin’
They’re bitin’ real good
Down at Butch’s pond
Away out in the woods
It wasn’t even dark yet
Our limit had been filled
Twenty pounds of catfish
Our mamas would be thrilled
The catfish are bitin’
They’re bitin’ real good
Down at Butch’s pond
Away out in the woods
I went to get the stringer
To take our catfish home
But all the catfish, they was gone
The knot had come undone.

I sat and looked at Marty
“I thought you tied it good.”  “Me too.”
And then he shook his head and laughed
And we knew what to do.  See,
The catfish are bitin’
They’re bitin’ real good
Down at Butch’s pond
Away out in the woods.

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Comments (15)
  • denus on Jan 18, 2009

    really great work man.

    cheers,

    denus

  • Debra. on Jan 18, 2009

    Oh, it reads like a song! How clever!

    God bless.

  • Ziggy C on Jan 18, 2009

    Good job.

  • QuinMonty86 on Jan 18, 2009

    What a cute poem. I could just see it all in my mind. (and for some reason, I hit the l like it button, but it didn’t take)

  • nishant.varma on Jan 18, 2009

    well written

  • Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Jan 18, 2009

    This sounds like an song from long ago,It reminds of sweeter years past, nicely put…

  • poetic enigma on Jan 18, 2009

    great poem,
    very interesting

  • papaleng on Jan 19, 2009

    very heart-warming piece.

  • Placid Quaker on Jan 19, 2009

    Hey, can I have your permission to put that to music? I can just about hear Skynyrd playing that song…

  • nutuba on Jan 19, 2009

    Hey Placid Quaker, you bet. I’d love to hear this put to music. You’ve have my express and sole permission to use it. Besides, I know where you live. :-)

  • Morgana on Jan 19, 2009

    I really liked it lol. Very good, enjoyed it very much.

  • Darren Goad on Jan 20, 2009

    I agree it would go perfect with music.

  • William L Domme on Jan 21, 2009

    That worked. I’m grabbing the poles and headed out the door.
    Good sense of being there.

  • sihana on Aug 25, 2009

    Excellent poem. Give us more.

  • Angela Ohm on Nov 29, 2010

    This is a wonderful poem ! Thank you for sharing !

    Angela

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