Rural south in US, pure water, fish, trees, river, old men, memories, sun, Indian graves bottom of river.

Come on down home

where the rivers so clean

you can drink right above

the Indians graves

buried deep beneath

the water.

A sun so bright

it sparkles silver

on the birch trees

with paisley patterns

on the tall  yellow grass.

Little bass jump high

in whirlpools of green

foam and mist.

Down the way a piece,

old men sit on wobbling

wooden chairs lined up

along the aging pier

with rusty wenches

and cracking barrels,

crab traps kicked

to the railing’s edge;

fishing line tangled

in knots as the sun

begins to slowly sink.

There is smell of rabbit

cooking on the fire

in the air like old times.

And a far away laughter;

pure pleasure.

Then the old men smile

their brown tobacco smiles.

They chew away and nod

their heads. Dusk is settling.

There is the calm

of days gone by.

The Indians left for the

high places to hunt.

Fishermen were rough and tumble

till it was all fished out.

Now, the old men dream

the dreams of all the

yesterdays.

No hurry, all things

come in time.

An orange, violet sunset

sends shifting rays

of rainbow light across

the trees and river

touching the old men’s faces.

You can hear the river singing;

sweet sound of life in motion.

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 10, 2009

    amazing script…lovely!!

  • Sourav on Nov 10, 2009

    Nicely written, very well described.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 11, 2009

    Very good writing, Kitty. You write like a southerner. My Grandmother was part Cherokee. Nice metaphors and flow.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 11, 2009

    Very good writing, Kitty. You write like a southerner. I enjoy you fine metaphors and the flow you achieve with your words.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 11, 2009

    Very good writing, Kitty. You write like a southerner. I enjoy your fine metaphors and the flow you achieve with your words.

  • Prometheus Ridley Scott on Nov 14, 2009

    Very good, Kitty.

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