Down This Lonely Highway

Phill Senters on Apr 15, 2009

Tags: dark, highway, whiz

A poem about driving late at night.

Driving down the highway,
thru the lonely dark.
Wishing for a likely place,
where I can quickly park.
And finally fix this little thing,
that’s got me in a bind.
Because my eyes are floating,
I think I’m going blind.
But down this lonely highway,
don’t care what speeding is.
I’ve got to find a place to stop
and take a nice long whiz!

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Juhls on Apr 15, 2009
Hehe, it sounds so serious and contemplative at first (or at least I feel like you are so overwhelmed with fatigue) so the ending was a funny little surprise. Great b & w photos.
Dee Gold on Apr 15, 2009
I don\’t drive but I think it’s tiring
Kate Smedley on Apr 15, 2009
Cool poem Phill, like the ending!
Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 15, 2009
Phil your a legend bs poem is fantastic and is funny all at once great job my friend.
icanfixthat on Apr 15, 2009
hey i did not mean that to say bs it was the read like this

Phil your a legend poem is fantastic and is funny all at once great job my friend. sorry about that spelling thing
Jo Oliver on Apr 15, 2009
ha ha love the ending
Duff D Moss on Apr 16, 2009
That\’s what the empty coke bottle is for dude
Ruby Hawk on Apr 16, 2009
LOL that’s a good one.
Dante Monaldo on Apr 20, 2009
Great poem. I love the ending!
Elizabeth Abbott on Apr 21, 2009
I like this poem. Sensitive. Liz
Bo Russo on Apr 21, 2009
I was pretty sure that was going to finish it of with a little twist,I was right.
vim3 on Apr 22, 2009
That is really the funniest poem I’ve read in recent times. Lols! Good one!!
clay hurtubise on May 15, 2009
lol, good one!

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