This is a poem I wrote when thinking of my home in Dominican Republic.

Such beautiful Views
That amazed my eyes
Can this be true?
The beautiful waters
So clear and blue.
 
A Real nice place for a swim
Or to simply take a dive,
My breathing feels better
And my skin feels alive.
 
Everywhere there’s a party to attend
 Where people are having fun together,
This place has everything you want
Even the perfect weather.
 
The beautiful people
Living their lives.
I would love to stay
But my plane soon arrives.

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 29, 2009

    Sounds like a very nice place to be.

  • richard reed on Jan 29, 2009

    nice piece.

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