I can be alive once again if someone wants……….

When ever I see my shadow whether in sunlight or on full moon’s night,

I realise how change I’m from root to branch.

My childhood repressed and vanished.

My teenage spoiled and ceasing.

My future is in grave danger and devastated by me.

Some where written in stars,in between two lover’s kiss,in drop of sea,

in tree’s pith,on mountain’s peak,on azalea(shrub)

on bird’s wing,on lunar maria and on sun rays

that  I’m desolate,carrying frown face and will always be in hurdles,

and  considering this as my fate I have to accept it.

I want to live in that world where there will be not even single tear,

where moon will sing melodies for me so I can sleep well,

where my heart will beat as loud as thunder.

where birds will make garlands for me as my success.

where my melted emotions will be again in solid form.

Now,I plea and ask  that will you

ramble with me in those meadows as I used to?

will you help my heart to beat once again with true love?

Will you dig tunnels for me to hide from disaster? as

I dug ditches earlier and now facing the music.

Will you stand right next to me as being my backbone

for buck up,for jocundity and for catching me when I’ll fell?

Will you be my torchbearer and will you take me out of this endless dark street?

Who ever will approve this I’ll just say

Don’t wipe my tears just provide me shoulder to cry on.

Don’t make me merry just teach me how to be happy.

Don’t save me from falling into deep well,just tell me how to get out of that.

When I’ll be lost in maze don’t take me out of that

just tell which street leads towards my destination.

When I’ll be unconscious, don’t give me mouth to mouth (CPR)

just suggest  me how to live a life.

Don’t bring revolution in me just drag me to life.

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  • binyumanyun on Oct 19, 2011

    Nice info..

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 19, 2011

    Most beautifully express such talent

  • pattiann on Oct 19, 2011

    Fantastic– Pattiann

  • naruto100 on Oct 19, 2011

    Beautiful pics. Good one.

  • Profit Buzz on Oct 19, 2011

    You have got a talent with poems.

  • DanielD on Oct 19, 2011

    Pure MAGIC… fantastic

  • ImKarn23 on Oct 19, 2011

    gloomy…’frown face’ gives wrinkles…smile!
    beautifully done

  • Sunjhini on Oct 19, 2011

    very touching write… loved the imagery

  • megamatt09 on Oct 19, 2011

    Good work.

  • girishpuri on Oct 19, 2011

    effective and touching aroosa

  • Princesss on Oct 19, 2011

    Great job. Amazingly Written. Hope to see more stuff from you. Hope your tears vanish as you start writing about your sad emotions and this will help you to be happy.

  • prayer2008 on Oct 19, 2011

    Nice work

  • notcar99 on Oct 19, 2011

    wow..

  • AmosTheCat on Oct 19, 2011

    Stunning, so sophisticated. You’re 16!? I can’t remember being 16 but I don’t think I knew my ABCs at that age.

    Leaving out an indefinite article, “a” and “an”, can sometimes be an effective poetic device and sometimes it can be make the reader stumble and have no other redeeming benefit to the line. Use it cautiously.

    AmosTheCat

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 19, 2011

    @AmosTheCat yes I am 16 thankx for praising and ur suggestions.

  • The Virtual Workers on Oct 19, 2011

    great work here but you know what i’m gonna say next… it a bit off the record so lets keep it off the record….

  • VoIP on Oct 19, 2011

    Yes.

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 19, 2011

    intense and provocative!

  • Joe Ram on Oct 19, 2011

    Nice one.

  • ittech on Oct 19, 2011

    lovely

  • theworkoutgeneral on Oct 19, 2011

    nice share. great job

  • Aalkaline on Oct 19, 2011

    Fantastic one.

  • Martin Kloess on Oct 20, 2011

    very good. ;)

  • Iqra Baloch on Oct 20, 2011

    there iz no one who who can compete u aroosa as people r trying………… u r just tremendous in writing anything:):)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 20, 2011

    Thankx @Iqra Balouch :D

  • FX777222999 on Oct 20, 2011

    Such a talent, great!

  • Shaunak Vats on Oct 20, 2011

    excellent words and even better images. love the work

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 20, 2011

    great work my friend

  • jjsam0311 on Oct 20, 2011

    Awesome ! You really have talent , a way to express your feelings in the form of poetic ode . Be sure to develop it further . Great work . All the best

  • marqjonz on Oct 20, 2011

    Your best poem yet. Very good.

  • athena goodlight on Oct 20, 2011

    Nice poem. You live your life the way you planned it, not because someone wants you to live it the way they like you to.

  • tonywriter on Oct 21, 2011

    WOW!! Very Creative Poem ;) :) 8)

  • thelyricwriter on Oct 21, 2011

    Another great poem friend.

  • nurzaira on Oct 21, 2011

    beautifull poem and pict

  • dwisuka on Oct 21, 2011

    very good

  • ayub75 on Oct 22, 2011

    being so young you are going 25 years ahead of your age. lovely and excellent writing and best choice of lovely words.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 22, 2011

    Revisiting this article.

  • Andrew Handley on Oct 22, 2011

    another beautiful poem. Keep em up!

  • AINIEE on Oct 22, 2011

    simply awesome,,,,no wrods aroosa,,,, thumbs up,,,:-)

  • magus magus on Oct 22, 2011

    nice share

  • ayeshar on Oct 22, 2011

    nice poem Aroosa and good pictures to go with it!
    downright depressing though, i would like to read cheerful stuff from your side too!

  • V rank on Oct 22, 2011

    beautiful… beautiful…

  • Socorro Lawas on Oct 22, 2011

    I adore your illustrations!

  • bolive on Oct 22, 2011

    you are such a good poet

  • OrmusNation on Oct 22, 2011

    Really good poetry.

  • vardhanh71 on Oct 23, 2011

    good poem and nice pics.

  • Robertt1820 on Oct 23, 2011

    congratulations, Nice work!

  • AmateurWriter on Oct 24, 2011

    niceee

  • J L Carey Jr on Oct 27, 2011

    cool poem. I really liked the images too, very cool.

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    blowed my mind

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    great work………….

  • ittech on Oct 27, 2011

    good work

  • tiffi on Oct 29, 2011

    great share and clever title ;)

  • pattiann on Oct 30, 2011

    I agree that I want to live in a world with no tears, too. It hurts me when other people are unhappy as I am too happy.

  • holly the chef on Oct 30, 2011

    Good post!

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 31, 2011

    Lovely.

  • thetoplad on Nov 3, 2011

    great

  • PebblePath on Nov 4, 2011

    nice title n a wonderful poem :) cool B)

  • misterdd on Nov 5, 2011

    Very very nice. I like it

  • Scarix on Nov 5, 2011

    so sweet…

  • aisha jamal on Nov 8, 2011

    well written

  • realityspeaks on Nov 15, 2011

    Excellent write

  • sheilanewton on Nov 29, 2011

    You are such a talented writer, Aroosa. This is another wonderful piece of work.

  • juliachild on Dec 25, 2011

    great share

  • Vinaya says good bye on Feb 4, 2012

    There is eternal sadness in your poem

  • VV on Mar 29, 2012

    GREAT SHARE THANKX

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