Draping Insanity Like a Coat

Atanacio on Mar 15, 2010

Tags: crime, drama, Jack the Ripper, saga, violence

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Another Jack The Ripper Saga…

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Draping insanity like a coat,

gripping her throat,

the air would stink,

and her mood immediately

began to sink,

bones crunched

like gravel beneath tires,

emotions burned like wild-fires,

then death entered,

fear stayed awhile,

and Jack smiled…

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Christine Ramsay on Mar 15, 2010
That is a scary read. Well done.

Christine
yes me on Mar 15, 2010
Yes Frank Jack the Ripper…. gripping stuff with great imagery.
standingproud on Mar 15, 2010
I don’t like Jack. :p
Lady Sunshine on Mar 15, 2010
I wouldn’t want to drape insanity like a coat. lol.
deep blue on Mar 15, 2010
My world was ripped apart Frank. Great imagery.
LoveDoctor on Mar 15, 2010
Draping insanity like a coat. Love the imagery here. nice flow. emotions burned like wildfires. wow! good one. I love this poem. good job.
Kakraba Afful on Mar 16, 2010
Smashing
RS Wing on Mar 16, 2010
Another great write Frank. A short story within your words of a madman bent on sheer terror. “Jack” was not a nice guy…..a cruel and psychotic physician of death.
Evelyn M Carter on Mar 16, 2010
Real nice Frank. Truly enjoyable read for me. Thank you for the share!
Stacey Watts on Mar 17, 2010
Chilling imagery as usual, my friend. I like this one. Nice work.
lillyrose on Apr 2, 2010
Chilling account of one of the more mysterious killers! fantastic imagery, description and presentation!
ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010
great write
Bone-soul on Jun 27, 2011
This was pretty good

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