Dream ~ a Collection of Haiku

sandcastle on Oct 1, 2010

Tags: adulthood haiku, childhood haiku, Dream Haiku, Life, shattered dreams, war

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Haiku on Dream, Childhood and Adulthood.

Haiku 1

childhood ~
with my eyes wide awake
my dreams bigger than me

Haiku 2

coming home from the
war, a soldier’s longing for
a good night, sweet dreams

Haiku 3

adulthood~
picking up the pieces
of shattered dreams

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Comments (24)

bebarrs on Oct 1, 2010
nice one! love it. by the way, how are you?
PSingh1990 on Oct 1, 2010
Nice Share.

Keep it up my friend.
LCM Linda on Oct 1, 2010
Nice share. Particularly like the 1st one.
Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Oct 1, 2010
as always…I LIKE
The Soul Explorer on Oct 1, 2010
I liked this! And the little baby on the picture.
papaleng on Oct 1, 2010
I’m amused by your lines, though i admit they are lovely ones somehow an element of a Haiku seems missing, correct me if I’m wrong.
Neilvert Noval on Oct 1, 2010
Appealing and straight to the point.
Neilvert Noval on Oct 1, 2010
By the way, Haiku 2 hits the spot.
wwkeen on Oct 1, 2010
nice share
JoeLopy on Oct 1, 2010
Very nice poems. Thanks for sharing.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 1, 2010
A very good selection of haikus.

Christine
SuperMember on Oct 1, 2010
great peom
pleas comment on my last articles!
Ranjan Mathews on Oct 1, 2010
Haiku bouquets
Perfume my senses
Dreams percolating true.
Brewed Coffee on Oct 1, 2010
Very deep. As always, love the meanings that go with each line.
nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 1, 2010
wonderful work..love it…i miss writing poems…thanks
GodsGrace on Oct 1, 2010
Nice Share
Inxxu on Oct 1, 2010
Wow, amazing and so true life,,,
Elma Sandoval on Oct 1, 2010
it\\\’s amazing how you can capture so much meaning with so little words… thank you
giftarist on Oct 1, 2010
Awesome compilation here, friend.
earthlyjewels on Oct 2, 2010
nice one! good job on this!
westgi on Oct 3, 2010
Beautiful, Interesting! Very informative! gigi
Percy on Oct 5, 2010
Every time i see your Haiku, I always read the line that goes through it. and it will always give me an impact on how to associate those haiku to the reality of life. Thanks.
Rhodora Bande on Oct 6, 2010
Your haikus have the power to let the reader think hard and reflect about life.
pschenck on Oct 19, 2010
Very nice! I especially loved the first picture!

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