Dream in The Church

Dark Antirex on Nov 20, 2009

A strange dream took me to another dimension.

I go away

I wont stay

Here and pray

Cause God never

Hears my prayer.

Never comes what i want,

Never brings God love,

Just this sad loneliness.

Accept this? No, I can’t.

Snow falls from clear sky

The church is gilded, why?

Monks are singing loudly,

People are praying proudly.

Candles extinguished -

So there is darkness.

Windows: shuttered?

I’m living and don’t want less;

I feel power leaves me

As I collapse

Yes! More light!

The most beautiful I’ve ever seen.

I’m so happy that never been.

An angel sings and I think to myself:

Take me on your holy wings,

I’m prepared to visit heaven.

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Written by Dark Antirex, 2009.

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K.Reshma on Nov 20, 2009
Lovely
drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009
Very good dream. Well done. I liked it.
diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009
Remember God not always there when we need him, but he is always on time.
ashan1614 on Nov 20, 2009
I think that should say when we WANT Him. He’s always there when we need Him, but in His time; not ours.
Eunice Tan on Nov 20, 2009
Magical and poetic. Great poem. Sometimes God answer ‘no’ to our prayers, but it still for our goodness.
Hansika on Nov 21, 2009
wonderful petry….
Frances Lawrence on Nov 21, 2009
Nice poem with a confused dream like quality.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 21, 2009
I totally agree with ashan..
Dark Antirex on Sep 26, 2010
I had some troubles with tenses, I wrote everything in present simple o_O

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