What does Dream Time mean to you?

 

I saw a vision so serene,

Its peace embraced me,

I had stumbled on tranquility,

A place so passionate,

That I was released to be.

 

The brightness of this beauty,

Did surround,

Leaving my heart with so much love to be found.

 

As I opened my eyes to stare,

I realized that my dream wasn’t there.

 

I gained hope from that moment on,

Knowing that on the note of every birds’ song,

That I may close my eyes anywhere and

My Dream Time will always be there.

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  • hfj on Feb 17, 2010

    Nice poem Cynthia. How come i didn’t see any mountain-top removal in that picture. Big issue in Kentucky and West Virginia right now. Massey Energy Inc. has more lawsuits against it than Carter has liver pills. haha You painted a beautiful picture with this poem friend. Well done.

  • ceegirl on Feb 17, 2010

    nice poem

  • Silent Wasp on Feb 17, 2010

    Great poem Cynthia. I wish i could write poetry like you can! :D

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 17, 2010

    A personal paradise to give us the strength to carry on. The photo is a beautiful projection of the text.

  • seema1962 on Feb 18, 2010

    nice piece of poem

  • Sourav on Feb 18, 2010

    Beautiful poem. Very well written!

  • kavis487 on Feb 18, 2010

    good poem keep it up…………….thanxxxxxx

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 18, 2010

    Nice one….

  • sambhafusia on Feb 18, 2010

    Excellent!!! well written …nice share..

  • albert1jemi on Feb 18, 2010

    Great share

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 19, 2010

    i dream all the time

    give me more time

    to do something else

    grateful
    lhlhlh

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 22, 2010

    Very smooth and light, love it.

  • drelayaraja on Feb 23, 2010

    Nice writing :)

  • Versatile Artist on Feb 24, 2010

    Dreams have their place and let us see what we normally dont.And sometimes take off where they left from the night before.Loved this piece and the picture,a smooth light piece to read.

  • Butterfly Dreaming on Mar 1, 2010

    When I think of the words dream time I think of the Australian Aboriginal Dreamtime stories of creation. A lovely poem! Keep up the good work Cynthia.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 8, 2010

    I am very sure that one day you will find your beautiful dreams become a part of your life. Loved this sweet poem!

  • rizzei on Mar 27, 2010

    nice poem..indeed :)

  • Thomas Hodge on May 24, 2010

    A nice tribute to our own individual escapes from the crushing reality that surrounds us on a daily basis

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