Like thunder and lightning, I fear you…

you blaze through and pierce me…
i know you…
enveloped in the heart of a savior…
i hear you…
ive been weak for days now…
come get me..please come get me..
you tell me, you love me…
you stretch me…
im tired and hungry..
you’ll feed me…
i tell you..i need you…i need you…
you say nothing…
yet you hold me…
i thank you…
you’ve changed me..
the dark still surrounds me..
the wind blows..
its raining…
*but im still now…
drenched as i am.
i smile..you are beside me

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  • Peter Cimino on Nov 21, 2008

    Powerful stuff. Well done again.

  • apesy on Nov 22, 2008

    it was all Him:)

  • clay Hurtubise on Nov 26, 2008

    Both the material and form are nice. Well done.
    Thanks,
    Clay

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