A poem for drew.

Drew Diligence

You’re a mean one

You’re rude words are not appreciated

If this how you talk to people

By everyone you’ll be hated

So take your foot

And put it in your mouth

Go pout in your corner

Or wonder about

But don’t come back around my way

I’ll blow you out of the water

You’ll have no chance to stay.

Obviously no competition for me

With not one article or photo for people to see

Lets have a look inside your brain

I bet there’s nothing for us to gain

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Comments (17)
  • cardy on Sep 27, 2009

    That was a true rant I love it it made me smile no end fab work I so agree with you!

  • martinpm on Sep 27, 2009

    nice composition. liked it

  • Atanacio on Sep 28, 2009

    Goodwrite :)

  • giftarist on Sep 28, 2009

    Nice one..Direct to the point..:)

  • Will Dee on Sep 28, 2009

    Interesting, sharp, to the point, and anger. Nice write.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 28, 2009

    A very interesting poem.

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Sep 28, 2009

    I like it. I\’ve just been deleting his comments. But thanks for calling him out.

  • chantell on Sep 28, 2009

    That’s right get it out. That was great. :) Standing Ovation :)

  • Drew Diligence on Sep 28, 2009

    More poorly written claptrap.

  • Dena McCusker on Sep 28, 2009

    Yes Drew, it may sound that way to you because it reflects your attitude. I guess you just had to read this poorly written piece bc you saw your name in the title. totally understandable, Drew. Thanks so much for contributing to my penny collection.

  • livemike on Oct 11, 2009

    This is good Dena.Love your attitude and i too have had some serious rude people annoying me .You speak out and dont take any crap from anyone.

  • Kaulus7 on Oct 17, 2009

    I agree, I wrote a piece of FICTION.
    Of course its “idiotic claptrap” if you take it literally!

  • Drew Diligence on Oct 18, 2009

    Aww… What’s the matter?

    Did the nasty man give your self esteem a boo boo?

    It’s not my fault you can’t write.

    My work is out there… Feel free to vent away.

  • Dena McCusker on Oct 18, 2009

    Drew, you sound like a broken record. Get over yourself.

  • Drew Diligence on Oct 18, 2009

    Ditto!

  • clafleur on Oct 22, 2009

    i see you have met the sock puppet

  • Stickinthemud on May 28, 2011

    lol… yeah, I’ve had a pest problem before, too.

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