Drinking Night

pattiann on Nov 2, 2010

Tags: drunk driving

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Here is a little poem I made up. It’s a serious topic, I know.

I went to a party.

I left feeling hearty.

I had a night of drinking.

I got behind the wheel not thinking,

I hit with my car a little boy

There went all my joy.

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Comments (11)

Guy Hogan on Nov 2, 2010
I drink a lot. I’m kind of glad I don’t have a car.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 2, 2010
It is so easily done when you’ve had a drink.

Christine
albert1jemi on Nov 2, 2010
great share
Kaye TM on Nov 2, 2010
so sad….
sloanie on Nov 2, 2010
I think most of use have driven when we know we shouldn’t have.
PSingh1990 on Nov 2, 2010
Nice Share.
bellatwix on Nov 3, 2010
Good reminder to all who drink and drive.
Rehoboth on Nov 3, 2010
nice
Starpisces on Nov 3, 2010
well composed poem, and luckily it’s made up…
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 3, 2010
A terrible situation.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 5, 2010
The sad thing is some people wont stop drunk driving until they have killed someone. Even sadder, some wont stop even then.

We put them in jail; they come out to drink and drive. Put them in jail again; they repeat offend. Take their license permanently; they drive without one.

We live in a society that requires transportation, and independence. The real scourge is alcoholism. If we eradicate that, we eliminate the problem. Most people who drink socially are responsible enough to take a taxi or have a DD if they are past the limit.

We need to find other solutions.

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