This auditory poem uses the unusual metaphor of a leaking faucet to explore the mysteries of life.

Faucet by andrewk100.
Photo Source

Ripe, round, and ready

Like bottom-heavy raindrops

From dripping, dribbling water faucets,

We hold our bulging, bulbous bellies

As we watch the drip drip dripping faucet

With its plop plop plopping

The prospect of which makes us painfully ponder the various routes to the drain

Ripe, round, and ready

Like bottom-heavy raindrops

From leaking, weakening water faucets,

We watch the incessant, insipid plickity plop plunk plop plunk

And consciously consider who the plumber was:

We ask, “Who fashioned such a device

That so rudely, restlessly rouses

Our billowing, baby-filled bellies?”

Plink plink plop go the droplets

“Who made that faucet?!” we demand.

“And from what faulty materials?”

Plunk plunk

“And who turned that knob?”

Plop

 “And for what purpose?”

Plop plop plunk plop plop

Ripe, round, and ready

Like bottom-heavy raindrops

From soaking, choking water faucets,

We feel ourselves bursting with billions upon billions

Of contractions and cravings and convulsings

To burst forth and freefall from the faucet,

So we implore with finality:

 “To what deep, dark, dank, dungeoneous, dangerous,

Unseen, underground,

Slimy, sinuous sewer passages

Does that drain lead?”

As we rumble, stumble, and tumble,

Ready raindrop over ready raindrop,

Each suspended in the isolated and solitary

Gush and swoosh

Of waterfalls rushing to their source,

The centripetal force of the drain

Smoothly sucking, persistently pulling, elegantly embracing

And enlarging an orifice into each delicate droplet

To swallow the abysmal vastness

Of the salty, sweet, sinuous, sensuous sea 

Just beyond the passage that led

From the faulty, flawed, failing faucet to the drain

Through droplets... by HAMED MASOUMI.
Photo Source

If you liked this poem, you might also like these:

Garden of Eden Revisited

On God, Reincarnation, and Purpose

Sulfur and Blueberries: God Through the Senses

8
Liked it
Comments (9)
  • Jenny Heart on Sep 14, 2009

    Very uniquely written. Creative indeed!

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Sep 14, 2009

    Wow.

  • ginahinderliter on Sep 14, 2009

    I liked it!

  • Lostash on Sep 14, 2009

    Very deep indeed! Like it!

  • Guy Hogan on Sep 14, 2009

    All the rivers flow into the seas and the seas do not fill. And to think that it all begins with a leaky faucet.

  • Rana Sinha on Sep 15, 2009

    Delightful! Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Now off to the faucet to get some water to drink.

  • CaSundara on Sep 15, 2009

    LOL – excellent analogy, I liked this!

  • Kinga on Sep 20, 2009

    neat! great anthology.

  • fragile18 on Oct 1, 2009

    great. some lines can be a tongue twister. LOL. i like it.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading